(A CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme written for OctPoWriMo – Day10)
Anger, deep and grave, deforming the humane version of me
Prisoner to its ever-growing whims, I, just let it be
Little did I know of the predicaments that would follow
In this raging anger, peace evaded, life became hollow
Letting go of this rage, to forgive, for me, it’s no child’s play
But I’ve to let go, lest this stuffed up anger makes me go grey
So I knead my thoughts, mould it into a write-up for the day
Prose, poetry, anything that helps me find peace within me
Sadly, write-ups do fail at times; then comes Time to hear my plea
Weapon of the Wise, Time has an answer, if one would allow๐
Time does seem to have answers…well expressed, Roshni. โค๏ธ
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Thank you, Punam๐๐
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You are welcome.
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‘Time has an answer, if one would allow’ ๐ love this line!!
Beautifully penned, dear ๐
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Thank you so much, Priya๐๐
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My pleasure
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I love the opening lines!
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Thank you, Angela๐
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Yes, it’s not a child play. I can connect with this one. Lovely!
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Thank you, Payal๐
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Awesome write!
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Thank you, Jennifer ๐๐
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Time has an answer. Often it doesn’t come quickly enough to stop scars from forming, I’ve found.
~cie from poetry of the netherworld~
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You’re right…Thank you๐๐
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Lovelyโฆ
โWeapon of the Wise, Time has an answer, โ
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Thank you ๐
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I loved the last line Roshni ๐
Well done with the form too..
Trying to suppress anger in some poem/ prose seems to be a great idea !! ๐
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Thank you Nima๐๐
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Welcome dear ๐
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Superb poem so well composed, Roshni. A time to let go and embrace love.๐๐๐
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Thank you so much Kamal๐
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You are welcome Roshni ๐๐๐
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Your writing is excellent, Roshni!
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Heartfelt thanks Yassy๐ I see you as an exceptional poetess, so this comment means much๐
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I am honoured, Roshni. Thank you so much .
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