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Endlessly

Posted on May 29, 2021 by Roshni

Image Credit : Sadje

Subtly does she adopt her nightly hues
Her remnants concealed within the new eve
Her time done, day retires for nightly peace
Subtly does she adopt her nightly shades
Carved in silent dreams and fears, the world rests
Till day is reborn- her time now to live
Subtly does she adopt her nightly hues
Her remnants concealed within the new eve!!!

A Triolet written for Sadje’s What do you see # 83

Thank you for reading 😊😊

21 thoughts on “Endlessly”

Sadje on May 29, 2021 at 5:44 pm said:

This is a beautiful poem Roshni. A subtle and soothing narrative, very pleasing. Thanks for joining in

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- Roshni on May 29, 2021 at 5:45 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much, Sadje 😊
  
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  - Sadje on May 29, 2021 at 5:46 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome 😉
    
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HappySoul on May 29, 2021 at 5:46 pm said:

Loved this Roshni ❤️subtly beautiful 😊

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- Roshni on May 29, 2021 at 5:47 pm said:
  
  Thank you HS ❤❤
  
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Shweta Suresh on May 29, 2021 at 6:35 pm said:

Beautifully described, Roshni. 😍

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- Roshni on May 30, 2021 at 9:47 am said:
  
  Thanks a lot, Shweta😊😊
  
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  - Shweta Suresh on May 30, 2021 at 11:26 am said:
    
    Pleasure 🤗
    
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Anisha on May 30, 2021 at 3:40 am said:

Subtly, she returns everyday. Wonderful poem, Roshni!
You’ve introduced me to a new poetic form, Triolet.

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- Roshni on May 30, 2021 at 9:49 am said:
  
  I am in love with triolet. So really glad to hear such a lovely comment. Thank you, Anisha. 😊😊
  
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  - Anisha on May 30, 2021 at 6:20 pm said:
    
    Pleasure is all mine! 🙂
    
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Chris Hall on May 31, 2021 at 6:57 am said:

A beautifully subtle piece, Roshni! I too am new to the triolet form and I love something new. 🙂

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- Roshni on May 31, 2021 at 11:41 am said:
  
  Thank you so much Chris. 😊
  
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Cozy Quiet Corner on May 31, 2021 at 8:33 am said:

Beautifully penned! 😊

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- Roshni on May 31, 2021 at 11:48 am said:
  
  Thank you💛
  
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Ravi Shankar on June 1, 2021 at 1:53 pm said:

Good

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- Roshni on June 1, 2021 at 3:10 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Ravi !
  
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  - Ravi Shankar on June 2, 2021 at 2:01 am said:
    
    Most Welcome Roshni !
    
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Vignesh S Raj on June 15, 2021 at 5:43 am said:

This is beautiful!

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- Roshni on June 15, 2021 at 8:35 am said:
  
  Thank you so much Vignesh 😊😊
  
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